Tuesday, 4 September 2018

My Poem

My Poem
I am a king creeping up on my prey
I wonder who will dare to challenge me
I hear my predator ready to hunt me
I see my whole kingdom
I want more under my control
I am the king of the jungle I am a lion

I pretend to have friends
I feel sad without my family
I touch the dirt with my colossal paws
I worry about my family
I cry tears that trickle down my cheeks
I am a scared little lion

I understand some people don’t like me
I say to myself stay strong
I dream to be with my family
I try to move on
I hope to find my family
I am a lion that’s all alone

By Zach.H

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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 September 2018 at 12:53

    Hi Zach I love your poem and I really enjoyed the part where you said I am a king creeping up on my prey and I love the picture.

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  2. Anonymous23 October 2018 at 10:14

    hi my name is Louie from kangaroa school I like your describing and riming

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  3. Anonymous6 November 2018 at 11:16

    hi my name is lyric from kaingaroa school i like your poem and
    i like lion

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  4. Anonymous19 November 2018 at 11:12

    Hi Zach nice lion poem

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  5. Anonymous4 December 2018 at 10:28

    Hi Zach this is a really nice poem
    and your blog has improved a lot form now to the start of this term
    Was this fun to make?

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