I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 23 May 2018
All About Me
Hi my name is Zach I go to Waitohu School in Otaki New Zealand. I am a year 5 in room three with some awesome friends. My favorite sports are soccer, cricket and golf and my favorite food is watermelon
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Kia ora Zach,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
Vicki
Hi. I love the way that you love sports
ReplyDeleteI love watermelon too And I ate the skin when I was little too.
Next time maybe add some more punctuation.
How many friends do you have in total.
From Tim
HI my name is kaylee,my favourite sport is soccer and cricket not much of golf and i like watermelon too.do you play in a soccer or cricket team and play golf? i play soccer and i play with my family and friends cricket.
ReplyDeletesorry it was meant to be i play soccer in a team and cricket with my family and friends.
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